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These hills that rise and fall
You never let them grow to tall
You make another path
But you just cant seem to last          
The bumpy ride ahead
I hope you dont lose your head
I do  something nice
And  you wanna take my life

Chorus:
You're unstable
I dont know why
When something goes wrong
You start to cry

When i see you smile
Makes me think for a while
All of the good times
I remember in my mind
Everything's a surprise
I dont know with your eyes
Is it a  game
Do  you want just the fame

You're unstable
I don't know why
When something goes wrong
You start to cry

When i hand you what you want
Forget the lesson I was taught
Questions questions all the time
Another line ends the rhyme

How many times do i have to say
Sometimes i want to run away
How many times do i have to say
Sometimes i want to run away

You're unstable
I dont know why
When something goes wrong
You start to cry
wrote with someone else
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Ai-Kawaii Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2009  Student General Artist
I find this works,
though I feel the chorus should be a bit longer.
I tried my hand at writing lyrics,
I don't think they flowed well because I didn't have music to go along with.
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LemonofEvilcitrus Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009   Writer
Love it. <3333
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TheWorldCried Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2009   Writer
thank you
we were thinking of recording this
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LemonofEvilcitrus Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009   Writer
Sweet. :3
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